Score: 5

"Okay"

submission: Dream vs Real

date: June 17, 2009

This was a decent animation, but it was kind-of dull. The background illustrations weren't very good, they were quite un-professional looking. That is what you want to aim for. If you drew them yourself it might be better, it fits better with stick figures if you ask me.

Some music would make it less dull, the silence makes it seem more interesting. The same goes for any kind of action video, it is always better with some good fast paced music in the background.

Keep working on animation. If you use your ideas with the right animation and use the right techniques to make it seem better to the viewer, you will have some great videos.

Score: 8

"Good, but needs some fixing."

submission: i'am cumming rats!

date: June 17, 2009

The concept of the game and the overall gameplay was good, but this still needs some work.

Try adding some unlockables, so the player will have a goal to reach when playing.

Also, try making there be different levels for the player to reach. Playing the same thing over and over is a little bit boring.

Adding missions would also make it better.

Score: 3

"Why?"

submission: Banjo Kazooie Rock

date: May 22, 2009

If it is just a test animation, why put it on Newgrounds? We actually want entertainment, not experiments.

Pretty good animation though.

Score: 10

"Awesome"

submission: BM - Hollywise

date: May 24, 2009

Great job with that song. Everything is perfect, I don't know what else to say.

Amazing song.

Score: 9

"Good, but one problem"

submission: Super Mario Land Rock Remix

date: May 22, 2009

You did a good job with that, but I personally hate the sound of computerized guitars. It pretty much sounds like the 8 bit sounds. It would have been nicer if you got someone here to do it.

Everything else was good though.

Score: 9

"Good but bad quality"

submission: Slide Guitar Blues

date: May 17, 2009

That was great playing, but the recording quality was bad, and made it harder to enjoy it.