Score: 5

"Okay"

submission: Dream vs Real

date: June 17, 2009

This was a decent animation, but it was kind-of dull. The background illustrations weren't very good, they were quite un-professional looking. That is what you want to aim for. If you drew them yourself it might be better, it fits better with stick figures if you ask me.

Some music would make it less dull, the silence makes it seem more interesting. The same goes for any kind of action video, it is always better with some good fast paced music in the background.

Keep working on animation. If you use your ideas with the right animation and use the right techniques to make it seem better to the viewer, you will have some great videos.

Score: 8

"Good, but needs some fixing."

submission: i'am cumming rats!

date: June 17, 2009

The concept of the game and the overall gameplay was good, but this still needs some work.

Try adding some unlockables, so the player will have a goal to reach when playing.

Also, try making there be different levels for the player to reach. Playing the same thing over and over is a little bit boring.

Adding missions would also make it better.

Score: 3

"Why?"

submission: Banjo Kazooie Rock

date: May 22, 2009

If it is just a test animation, why put it on Newgrounds? We actually want entertainment, not experiments.

Pretty good animation though.

Score: 10

"Very odd, yet awesome"

submission: Don't Step On The Grass

date: May 21, 2009

That was really weird, yet really awesome at the same time.

Score: 10

"Insanely addicting"

submission: Learn to Fly !

date: May 21, 2009

I can't seem to stop playing this game, it is a load of fun and it is very addicting.

I have a feeling that you just made a great internet game hit, great job with this one.

Score: 9

"Dementedly Awesome"

submission: Tellertabbies

date: May 17, 2009

That was very weird, yet very awesome.

Score: 9

"Awesome, but very hard"

submission: Spewer

date: May 17, 2009

This game is great, but it is very hard. I got stuck on the "Polywog" level.

Score: 10

"You have a lot of potential"

submission: RnJ

date: May 17, 2009

You should keep making animations with this style. It is very unique, and intersting. You have potential to make good flash movies if you keep using that style, come up with original ideas, and make your videos entertaining.

Keep up the good work, I hope to see more from you. You have potential to be a great animator.

Score: 8

"Entertaining"

submission: Ness' Adventure Part 1

date: May 17, 2009

Although this was kind-of bland, I enjoyed it. I like the idea of this "Ness' adventure" series. The animation was great, as well as the concept, but it would be a little bit more entertaining if there was a little more than just background music. Maybe if you used some voice acting and sound effects, it would be a little bit more interesting. Great job though.

Score: 10

"Best thing I have seen in days"

submission: $eG@

date: May 15, 2009

Haha that was brilliant my friend. You got me at the "PINGAS" part because that has always been my favorite overused joke.